OK, good start to the beat. The problem is the WHOLE beat sounds like an introduction beat (meaning that it is choppy and stays choppy). I like were this could go but you need to bring in a clap or snare on an even count maybe once or twice per bar of the beat. You can't really rap to this how it is right now. Let the beat run out and flow so it doesen't stay choppy and this beat will be tight. The piano is cool (did you play that or sample it?)

I've only been makin beats for about 5 months so i'm learnin the production side of beats as well. Feedback on my shit and check
"Incidental Contact" i made EVERYTHING, the beat, vocals, mixing from scratch. The beat is looped and is in it's preliminary stage with no breakdowns.

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