I found this piece to be soothing. Maybe because some of the stuff written was something i could link to. In my own way. Apart from the first line, it seemed quite distant. Like it was taken to unusual extremes to depict a core angst.

Intriguing piece. Though some of the spelling mistakes put me off a bit. And once or twice the line construction a bit disconnected. But nonethless a piece which i found intriguing to read. A quiet storm...

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