Good piece here. I don't know quite how to describe it.. but in all 3 verses the flow paused for a moment after a line. Lemme show:

ST's 1st:

From the first start, this isn't what i've chosen//
Fighting my life frozen, not to move when i'm provoken//
Its like lifes part of the mic chokin' like the cords wrapped in token//
To take my thoughts my minds broken//
^^^ After the third line, you should came with a line that rhymed with Cause then hit it off from there. Work on the flow and word usage.

Realist's Verse:

New to this, he made fun of my lunchbox man
How many little kids you know own a grand
Reprimand then made it all seem like a plan
^^^ Once again, after the 2nd line, maybe you shoulda N ended with a word that rhymed with knives. Your Flow was good in your verse tho, props for that.

ST's 2nd:

Its not my case to bitch, neither is it yours//
But i'm not here to tell a story, so don't tell me yours//
My lifes like the itches without cures//
^^^ Same explaination. Cancel the 3rd line N start with the rhyming word for the following 3 lines.

OVERALL: Flow was good, could be worked on a lil bit. Imagery was great from Realist, ST, you could use some work on that and your internals. Vocab was decent, up it a little. Good read tho, Keep Droppin.

-Formula.

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