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Old 11-04-03, 08:52 PM   #14
Rappad
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aight not gonna do a one line unexplained vote, but I will break this down thoroughly...

B2k-
Have ya dented my record? If ya have I can't recall...
I guess like ya rhymes, ya leave impressions very small.

^^lol...decent opener...pretty good punch...7/10

Ace of Spades went missin...on a milk carton for so long...
Just a kid lost in thought, so I'll send ya back where ya belong.

^^nice personal.....8/10

Ponderin ya loss, confused, schooled by the Killer of RB...
Ya commence ta moving on, by graduating to a lesser degree.

^^didn't like this...weak punch...6/10

He puts God before girls, his profile shows it for all ta see...
But I'm the opposite and on my knees before him, cuz I worship pussy.

^^lmfao....nice shit....perfect wording of that line....10/10

He's a dreamer, accomplishments like vegetarians on mutton...
So drop ya verse like ya jerkin off cuz ya fond of doin nothin.

^^nice finisher...good shit...9/10

Total-40/50

comments-nice verse, nearly all bars were nice, good personals etc.....most of all what I liked in ur verse was the arrangement....and by that I mean each line was arranged to flow perfectly, which as opposed to a lot of other peeps on rb, who come up with great ideas for punches but can't figure out a way to arrange them in one line.....nice job....

Ace-
Distorted proportions, we've all been taught to believe that practice makes perfect//
Retorted extortions, checking this kats rec and verse shows that practice ain't worth-it//

^^nice opener...real nice flow...good punch...8/10

34 years old and hes still thinking that head-hunting's a profession//
Similar to that of his rap game, they are both pointless obsessions//

^^this would be good if everyone else who battled born didn't use it as well......5/10

Take a glance, you'd think that after 128 battles one you would progress//
Wrong, disguise this guys post and he's just a noob doing less than the best//

^^decent...a bit weak.....7/10

Lets protest this arrest, I'm degrading your ratings with my residual violence//
Killing you softly, even though i bid you one of my friends//

^^decent punch, messed up flow...6/10

Stripped you of desire, pursued you to retire, your purpose of birth is filled//
Stepping up to me altered you, cuz in reality you were born-to-BE KILLED//

^^lmfao...tight ass finisher..10/10

Total-36/50

comments-decent verse, couple of weak punches, my advice is when you battle someone and plan on using personals, search some of their other battles and read a couple of them, or make personals off of them, etc.......your verse was nice, no doubt, but born cam just a bit harder...

Vote=born

mad props to both.......bout time I see a nice battle in FL