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Old 11-04-03, 09:08 PM   #3
Walter Wall
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Good flow and it was a easy read
but the content had much to be desired
The conclusion was near dope, but the rest seemed like nothing but filler
But some more depth
and cohesiveness to the entire piece
and Itll have good potential
keep droppin

hit up my open mic entitled Maturity, thx
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