ur rhymes was pretty simple in the begining....one syllable rhymes are pretty weak for a track like this....and it seemed like u were really trying to do a 50 Cent style track.....the farther u got into the track the more u seemed like u was gettin into it so I kinda gotta give u props....but in the end nothing stood out that great and overall it was basically a subpar battle kinda thing..

also word of advice.....what's the point of having a hook if u only have 1 verse?

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