Ok, the breakdown:


Copy~Righted- Ur 1st bar was wack, had no complexity and the flow was waaaay off. After that, u seemed to have settled in. Some of punches hit hard, like the Boxer line was nice. Had a personal in it which always helps. Flow was off at times but decent. Try to match ur amount of syllables for each line, it will help the flow. Creativity was mostly there, finisher was kind of soft but not a bad verse overall.

Ismael Sanchez- Ok, ur flow was off, really really off. You constantly had a short line, followed by long line, followed by two short lines, or somethin like that. It also affects the punch itself, so try to stick with whatever amount of syllables u start with. Any "suck dick" lines are played and wack, so try to limit them to 0. Punches were not quite there, complexity was there but no creativity.


Overall, I'm a give it to Copy~Righted because of harder hittin punches and had a better flow. Sry, can't poll yet pz.

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