IP:
ehhhh.....not great
opener-time...um coulda been worded better
closer-pak...both weak but time's was herbish
personals-time
punches-pak
wordplay-pak
creativity-time
originality-time
vocab-tie
OVERALL- i think time took this with good vocab more creative nice personals and ure few punches didnt hurt you
pak u had nice verse ait punches ok wordplay and good vocab as well
no hate just my honest "TU CENTS"
peace
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