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Old 11-04-03, 11:09 PM   #10
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ehhhh.....not great

opener-time...um coulda been worded better
closer-pak...both weak but time's was herbish
personals-time
punches-pak
wordplay-pak
creativity-time
originality-time
vocab-tie
OVERALL- i think time took this with good vocab more creative nice personals and ure few punches didnt hurt you

pak u had nice verse ait punches ok wordplay and good vocab as well

no hate just my honest "TU CENTS"

peace