not bad
but no where near your best capabilities
rhyme scheme i liked...suited this piece well
content wasnt bad...but was a bit basic
i guess this was keyed?...

'So this fight i will ignite, untill he blows out my candle
Im strapped like a sandal, and prepared at every chance
I stared into the devils eyes, when they told me not to glance
^best lines

and it had some decent imagery in places
props