I think you could have kept going with this... it kinda left me
hangin at the end... but overall it was a good read... you had
good imagery to what you wanted us to invision... as well as
good structure...although some of the words didnt rhyme all to
well, but you dont always have to have that.... one thing i didnt
understand was "demies" what is that???

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