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IP:
I really enjoyed this reading.... it was very full of emotion and it
actually struck a chord and made me very sad while reading....
you had really good structure... vocab was on point for what you
need to get out.... your imagery was great it really painted a
picture of a young girl who was such an angel...I give you 4 stars
lol.....Keep Writing.
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