i agree w/ filed, it does seem just like empty writings, but those
are the ones that get you to write again... if you just give it a little
push sometimes.... overall it was a decent read... the problem
i seen with it was that you put too many big words with nothing
to back them up... you structure was good except for that part
in the middle that had the extremely long lines but it worked out
in the end.... Keep Writing.

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