hmm...really simple piece not sure if i liked it...But im a mod so heres some constructive critism.....Decent piece i actually like the paragrapgh format everyonce in a while...Easy reading....You tried to dig deep on this subject but i think you feel short with your lack of intense words and simple rhyme structure....im not huge into the romance of things i like things that are dirty...hmmm i need a frosty.....

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