this was an aight battle but word perfect...structure gives a good view of wot the flow is goin to be sumtimes and yours was off...
BREAKDOWN=
punches=pro
personals=laked them
flow=pro
structure=pro
vocab=word
creativity=word
wordplay=word
laugh factor=pro
sustainment=pro
metas=pro
overall=pro

he jus hit harder wid punches and metas.....
props to both..pz