ok..you are the second person i gotta yeall at for beating me to using this beat lol..ok..flow started a little off... then got better..delivery is good emotion wise for the most part...but you need to work on saying shit more clearly.. if you do that the accent or whatever you want to call it you have could be a bonus for you.. youve got a diiferent voice just enunciate better at some spots...overall cool shizzle man.. just a little bit to work on..ill check the finished version and such whens its done..peace
return the favor please..
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