Good drop. Did seem like a rap more than a poem. Structure was ok, in my opinion coulda used a lil work. Agreeance with filed. Too much info without ending to understand. But I understand how u wanted to see ppls reaction on the first part of it. Finish it up and post it so we can see it. I'm sure it'll be a great azz piece. Overall great job so far, n I like wut u got. Keep it up. Much respect.