its a pretty basic, alot used topic, that just about everyone can relate too, almost everyone feels looked down upon by some ppl once in a while.

its a good topic, if you can give it something else, add on to what else is always said and make ppl think. to make a used topic unique and have a new flavor. give it your own touches. It has some of its own, but i think you could still branch out more, put more unique thought in it.

the structure was alright, and the flow was pretty good. emotion was ok, could feel hate.

keep posting!!!

~Tera~
DONT HATE

PS dont let ppl get you down, what the hell do they know about you right!?

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