Real dope and deep piece ya'll dropped. Not being able to distinguish which MC wrote which verse, i'ma jus point out the good stuff in both.

Both had the flow on point, multi's, vocab. 2nd verse had a flashback, which was dope (Fight the Power). Loved the premise at the beginning, it brought up a dope bar:

im lacking the fight to challenge our cultures hurried destruction
but am i worried over nothing, is the subject of disscusion. .

1st Verse was ill, everything was dope, flow was on-point. Dope Bar(s):

these Folks Are kidding me, right?! because There's No Way,
the same kids singing to britney'll be bobbing their Heads to Cage!
girls Wearing Braids, bubble gum teens hearing D. Stroy and,
turning on Celph after learnin the lyrics of their favourite boy band
^^^ Fucking real, and Ill too, very nice.

2nd verse kept the pace and delivered just as good as the 1st did. Flow, multi's, everything was there to make it equally as good as the 1st. Dope Bar(s):

whatever happened to 'fight the power?' another misconstrued idea,
seems rappers today are being controlled by a puppeteer,
corrupt radio stations,forcing them to adhere,
because the only emcees 'keepin it real',no-one gets to hear,
^^^ Again, Fucking Real and very dope. Great job.

OVERALL: Both of ya'll MC's did a great job on this Open Mic. Very dope and ya'll stayed on the topic and flowed well the whole piece. Great work.

-Formula.

** Peep this-- http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=89771 It's similar to ya'lls Collab.. Feedback appreciated. Much thanks. **

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