this was a simple, yet strong message piece. it seemed down to earth, and natural.

the flow worked, even thou it was basic, it didnt take away from the piece, and they didnt seemed forced.

the structure was good, and the spacing between the lines did give each line a little more attention.

vocab was pretty basic, but that too didnt take away. because the message and emotion were the main focus.

you gave it a bit of your own flavor that also added a uniqueness to it.

~Tera~
DONT HATE

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