Thread: Origin Vs Catch
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Old 11-05-03, 06:59 PM   #17
Gene Pool
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my vote go's to origin. catch no hate or nuttin but ur verses were a bit to plain, u gotta come a bit harder with ur punches and extend ur lines a lil more and try to use some more wordplay. origin took this with a lil bit better punches but needs improvement, u used a lil bit of worplay but I thought it was lacking from ur verse a bit, both of u's need to use some better multi's to but close battle for the both of u's but my vote go's to origin. peace.

vote - origin

and if u got the time hit up my collab with masta C and Deva called (Second Best featuring Gene Pool and Deva) at the open mics and leave some feedback. muchly appreciated thanx in advance. peace.
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