i agree rapid but also one syllable is a pattern setter and it pends the beat you utilize.
the 50 cent peace is upsetting cause i cant stand 50...lol
i was satisfyed with it though i never prewrite so these ideas just flowed as i typed.
the hook was to set a standard and emphasize a lil bit on the subject reffered to i wanted both verses on but i knew the longer it was the less people would read.
thank you for critique