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Old 11-05-03, 11:08 PM   #11
DaIllistReBel
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Wow, close battle, the breakdown for the most part:


Dominator: Best part was ur flow, everything was well into place. Punches were there for the most part. The beginning was nice, a tight similie with nice wordplay in the first line. Ending was kind of wack, I think the "glock" lines are played out a lil. But solid verse overall.

DaCurse: Beginnin flowed very well, a nice similie to go with it. Very consistent with ur punches, I think the flow was a lil messed up right around the "remake line." But after that, everything was nice. Complexity was there too, and the ending was nice. Very good drop.


I'm a have to with DaCurse for a lil more complexity in his verse. Hot battle and much respect for both. Sry I can't poll, please drop an honest vote on my battle (link is below), it's gettin madd slept on. Much appreciated pz.


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=89525
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