the secind portion was good. nice vocab nice beat. easy to follow. i liked they trailin me but they failin to see a thing
I keep it discrete, so they have no reason for a sting
I am the king of my castle, the goat spot be my market place
grace us with a trace, you will surely catch a blast to the face
it sounded professional. what sucked was the first verse. it was too simple and it just plain sucked. try to make it longer. elevate