you never fail to keep bringing poems in your own style, even without a name im pretty sure i coudl figure out that it was you that wrote this.

it was a unique piece, and the topic was not something you see here everyday. and you painted it out well for us to understand what you were saying ( well most of use, minus the weakminded lol )

i agree with the ending, and i thought it was a great way to end it. as good as it may feel to pay someone back, i dont think there would ever be an end to getting revenge on everyone that hurts or does something wrong against us.

the flow was good and fit the piece, and the one liners added more of your emotion and feelings to it.

~Tera~
DONT HATE

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