ay yall i wrote this to the beat of JAY-Z and EMINEM's RENEGADE but its not done and im lookin for someone to collab with so PM me if ya wanna (u'll need 2 verses).

the three open mics i posted on were:
Slicad3nu- da fall of a great man
A2Z- Scetchbook Of Rain
Synical- Synical Ego


I’m the only rapper my age that’s classified as urban//
Disturbin, my whole generations methods of learnin//
But I cant help it if I’m far further intriguing//
Than a bunch a dickheads have our youth completely misleading//
Pleading and bleeding// dragged around kicking and screaming//
Drownin in the hazards of dreaming//
they beg us to keep reading//
When actually my blood has been heating//
my spinal fluids been leaking//
Hunched over everybody’s critiquing//

gimme some feedback