^ if u really want a challenge then I'll battle ya...could be used as a helpful tool for u to elevate...but u should come hard cuz I don't play in battles lol....and if we battle then u set it up n spit first...

as for ur verse...work on ur punchlines...and make em exist...and get rid of the simple rhymescheme...try rhyming bigger words and more of them in each line...

peace

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<center> I.J.L</center>