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ok ok,. that was aiight...you coudl work on the flwo a lil bit, i can tell from the flow you have this is supposed to go a lil slow which is cool, that's your style, but soem of your end syllabel rhymes were so so at best, work on your rhyming some, your message was solid, i felt it, your vocab was a lil young but that's cool too, work on the rhymes, get soem battles, (im up for whenever) up ya rep and ull be fine
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