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yo that shit was ill, i was feelin it, first verse was kickin, others were solid, btu it was still all a sogn boastin abotu how good you are, id liek to see you hti soem topics, or some free verse poetry, you got potential, ok structure, hard as hell, lookin at the pic of jay in the corner i thoguht it was him for a min
you got a real jay-esque feel to ur shit, id liek o see some more
(and yo im lookin for soem battles, pm me if u up for one)
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"..Very nice..Very emotional...real Deep piece..I really enjoyed reading this..there are few good writers on this site..and I think they are good cause simply they write some good shit..but..rarely I enjoy reading a piece..but..this was fantastic..peace.."
<center> HemiSphere
The Write Side Of Your Mind</center>
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