umm..

I wasn't feelin this...

no hook...beat was weak...you need to calm down on the voice modulation..

the chick sittin here with me says to work with your accent..not against it...cause it makes u sound soft...

thats her 2..

nonetheless..

keep spittin...

:sidenote:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=90217

...peep ^^