the verses are too damn long for 1.. & for 2 the flows rather off.. try to import multies in ur verses to try & create a bit of a rhyme scheme.. like..

bitch in a yard.
trick from afar.
dick with a car.
sick of the bars.

put shit like that within ur verses & at the end of each line to have shit flow better..

for example..

this rap shit makes me wanna clap shit.
i've mapped it & made it thru the wrath bitch.

but on to the collab..

to me Yaz had the best verse as far as content goes, cause none of yall had a great flow, but yaz had lines that made a nigga think about some shit, like his opener.. overall i give this collab a 6 out of 10 for originality & metaphors..