Yo yer lyrics was tight and you flowed on beat but i thought that your voice was too high over the beat and not mixed into it. The other thing is that this song got boring to me cause yer flow expression lacked feelin' to me. You weren't puttin yer thougths on my head instead, you were just spittin...see what i'm sayin'. A lot of potential to get a lot tighter here cause the lyrics and flow was there, you just majorly lacked expression and or emotion in this drop...keep droppin'...get back on some of my audio shit when you can...1