That Was Pretty Fuckin Dope... I Enjoyed Each Line.. It Was Long But Worth Reading. You Defenitely Should Fix The Structure A Bit. I Felt Lost At Parts.. The Vocab Was Excellent. It Told A Very Vivid Story. Rhyme Scheme Needs Working On.. Everything Else Was Dope.

Peep My Open Mic Entitled "Don't Push Me."

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..Remember These Dope Kids?..

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