anybody step to me i leave bullet in ya back/
ready to put heat on ya head like a Miami fitted cap/

Theres no need for Miami to be on that line, make sure all your words have a reason they are there

u aint on da same level i'm on/
when bullets start flyin u get low like Lil' Jon/
talk tough and i'll get u bloody like a tampon/

Potential with those lines, fix the length of them so it flows better

me beating u is like tryin to fuck a drunk prostitute...it's too easy/
i'll leave u stitched up like a authentic jersey/

What in gods name does jerseys have to do with hoes...make sure your lines connect in some way...once again the flow really was bad on this one...say the lines out

when it comes 2 gunz i'm takin 20 shotz a night like James Worthy/
i'm taking over like Saddam Hussein/ i tuck in heat in only thing u tuck in is ya chain

hmm, might i suggest staying away from guns...this is the internet... i like the james worthy idea but you should keep a theme to your lines...spell check might do wonders for your verse...the tuck in idea is decent, just need a better approach

hope that helped