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Old 11-07-03, 04:56 PM   #14
Mr.Christensen
Fuck You, I Rhyme Better
 
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Decon...
the verse was a good read, flow wordplay and all were good BUT something about how you did the topic really really REALLY didnt go with me...while it was an easy read i got bored a few times...its like watching the godfather...its a great movie just not captivating (at least for me)

Baron...
your flow hasnt changed even though the name has...the flip on the topic was nice but didnt hit me all that much...vocab and wordplay were very good

Hi My...
We are all lazy so i dont want to have to highlight the screen to understand what you are saying...with that aside...how you came from 3 different views was well done, could have been much better had they each had a different style (flow, rhyme scheme...)
good verse, topic approach wasnt great but not bad

final vote:
Baron God
Hi My Name Is...
Deacon