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Old 11-07-03, 07:11 PM   #6
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this was nice
a real good read
it was simple, but you got it off in a way that makes the reader see it and understand, or maybe its just me
but i liked it, the flow, structure and vocab were str8
it's a message and a thought that i sometimes write about and find myself thinking about
nice drop
eep elevatin
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