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this was very long, but i liked your flow throughout the song.... the structure and scheme were well thought out too.... you need to elevate your advanced rhyming tecnhiques like multis & internals (although you had a few) and metaphors + similes... vocab needs work too.... all in all though, this shit was good
7/10
take a look at my open mic, "Mind Theory" please.... thanks
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