^ yea I was plannin on peepin that anyway...

n yea I agree that I coulda worked on those things in THIS song but I have so many styles...I been rapping for a while so I have most things down...now I'm trying to put a variety in my style for my audios (which is what this was written for)....neway thanx for the constructive crit..just posted all that so u know I can use good vocab, punchlines or w/e...I just didn't do it in this particular piece....

peace

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