At first I didnt think I'd like this because honestly I think sometimes people's love poems, and happy poems, ...they try to FORCE the emotion out into it, but the emotion you had in this was there, and it was real. You could feel the feelings you were when you read each word of this poem. I had to read the last part a few times to see how it fit in with the rest of the poem, because the structure of that was a little different... but truthfully after you read it over... you can tell it fits. The poem is great, the feelings are there, the structure is nice, and the topic is often used-but you did it beautifully. Great job.

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