I like this.. maybe it's because I know what its about, maybe it's because I was talking to you while you were writing it.. I dunno.. Theres something about it that hits me. I know, and I can tell by reading it, that you didn't get it all out... but there is a lot of feeling in it. Mostly anger, maybe some resentment.. I really like the begining.. because I like how you worded it, and then I like the end because it looks like that's where you put most of your anger into. The feeling wasnt consistent throughout the whole piece.. it was like the hurt was in the beginning, and then you just got angry.. I like this though, it's too Short for me.. because I know you coulda done more about it.. done more in it.. It was deep though.. the anger part of it.. but I think you could've put more of the hurt in it. I know you were hurt, you should have worked that into it more. Overall though, this was a good piece to get emotion out into. The flow was good too.. the wording, very nice.. good job hunni.

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