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I'm confused.. I dont really understand what this poem is about, other than the hurt that you feel about something. I have a slight idea about what it is about, but I garuntee I'm wrong.. because I have a few different ideas running through my head. I mean, the anger, and the emotion was obviously displayed to me.. but the message behind it wasnt obvious. I can't pick it up. This was a good poem, it would've been better if the message was displayed clearly, but obviously by the poem you didnt want it to be. SO i think this poem is great.
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