^ yea I read this while u was doing it...

in my opinion it's flawless..sums up the entire feeling u had...and even made ur mom cry...that's fucking amazing lol...

I really don't have any critique for this....I'm not much of a poet anyway so I can't say much....other than I enjoyed this ish...keep it up n maybe u'll get back to how u used to be

peace

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