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Old 11-08-03, 10:35 AM   #4
pot1ent
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there wasn't no good battle punches here. .I can relate where you are in your path of elevating. .Next you need to try & use longer more complex words & stop using wack punchlines like them in open mic untill there good. .

A good punchline is clever wordplay or metaphor. .Considering its only open mic there the only type you can use. .

Pz.
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