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it would have made it better to have more inners & have put in multis
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is po1ent blind?
Everyline had a multi in it. some tight work there, you came out siiiiiiiick.
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Hallways Gazed.. Nervous, He Spoke..
Always Amazed.. Deserved To Know..
Confidence In his Look.. Assurance In His Eyes..
Stopped What He Took.. When He Heard Her Decline..
She Looked For Truth.. n' Left More Of It..
She Stood For Youth.. n' All Less Fortunate
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This ill, you mos def came out good on this peice, and the imagery was shown hard through your multis. Although i thought this was more poetry then open mic