that shit dat u spit was whack for dat u should get smcked
take ur time dawg ur movin to fast
ur melody an rhyme scheme is gettin off track
hear u sayin u da best,homie i find it Hard to belive dat
u know what i suggest,start up ur semi,put on ur hard hat
go to work on ur skills an then come back!!!

-Supreme Da Ghost-
iama suposed to go after the person last posted rite???