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Old 11-08-03, 03:39 PM   #11
MyNd. FuLL
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smoka wins no doubt...

this was interestin cuz yarodie came ok.. and better than i thought
i wasn't feelin his structure though..need to restructure your bars
smoka had the worplay for sure and the vocab as well
punches hit, and metas were on point
gotta go wit
vote=smoka

favorite line
Claimin I Ran (Iran) But I Rack (Iraq) And Blast Ur Territory Just Judgin Ur Name//
Ur Nothin But Shamed, Like The 'First Mario' This Kid Is 'Duck In This Game' (duckin)//

nice punch
only thing smoka you a vet homie lose the // at the end of each bar...kinda newbish ya know...either way nice ass verse
and pretty decent battle