I dont think it sounded more like a poem. It could be considered poetic, but not neccessarily a poem. I agree with ^^Goofie when he said He liked how you mixed it up and showed the love as much as the hurt and pain. Thats true. In the beginning it was all happy, sappy, and full of love... then towards then end, you depicted the hurt and pain just as much as you did with the love in the beginning. This is well written, and the flow couldn't be better. This was ill. Great piece.

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