I really enjoyed this. I wrote something similar to this, but i didnt post it. I can totally relate to it, and the same thing happened with my dad. I'm now working overtime to pay his bills and I still take care of him. I did the same exact thing that you did. I didnt believe in prayin, but i prayed for his life. I prayed and i got those same results.

If you want the analyzation of it. The structure was great and so was the rhyme scheme. I loved it overall. One thing tho, you dont have to post who you all responded to. We can look that up in ur info. But if ya want, u can still post it. Great job overall. Keep droppin. Much respect.