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Old 11-08-03, 07:20 PM   #8
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I'm known best to disturb shit, I prevent mercy cuz I'm the first one to curse it
Plus my punch lines connect like this battle is cursive

^creative punch, kinda weak set up.....8/10

Not alarmed by this faggot, dom has no life so he stays on the boards
Shit he'd prolly knock shaq from winning rebound awards!

^good punchline, 7/10

I'm always elevating, while your going down
You wouldn't be a Dominator if you lived in Hockeytown!*

^wasnt really feeling it, good idea but blah 5/10

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Im'a be leavin ya verbally raped - feeling like a catholic alter boys
Cuz when your rappin bout sports your bound ta get deestroyed

not too hard...good set up though....plus feeding 5/10

1500 posts n Rappad still thinks playin scrabble with his gram is wordplay
Ive turned so many posers like u into herbs I could fill an ashtray

^feelin that punch, good set up and punchline 8/10

Im'a boil ya with my word and string you out like spaghetti
Then be splittin your wig like my keyboard doubles as a machette

^hardest punch in the battle, creative punch all around.....though i dont realliy like when punches in text refer to the computer.....but its all good 9/10



winner by points: Dominator

good verse though by rappad, alot of could of changed the battle if it was a bit longer...

yo i took the time to hit this up with the explanation yall wanted....so both of yall hit this up with an honest one, its a close battle

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=90336
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