Pretty Good collab here, holdin CV down well. Feedback by verses.

Masta C:
Ya verse was good man. Flow made it strong, content made it stronger. Vocab was good, Multi's were great. You had the more tender verse, as Gene Pool was the agressor.

Bar:

Cause these lies, just eat me alive, brings tears to my eyes, with every tear a part of me dies…
You just in a disguise, I pointed it out with no surmise, and this bond is just at the demise…
^^^ Real nice here, Multi's made it stand-out.

Gene Pool:

Like Auspicious said, you fell off from Masta's verse. Not big time, but your's was like a step-down. I liked the agression tho, made the read pretty good. Flow was ok, sketchy in some parts. Multi's were decent, Vocab was standard. Not a bad verse, jus that this collab woulda been dope if you would've stayed on Masta's level.

Bar:

what happened? I see the gatt in my hand, and I’m all bloodied to/
I feel so far apart, but I’m sittin 3 feet in front of u, fuck it, I’ll just put the gun on me to
^^ Real nice. Created the image of sorrow and confusion that you killed "her". . . if that's what you were tryna get across.

Overall: Was feelin this drop. Wasn't the best in the world, but it was good. Gene, for future collabs, work on maintaining that level with your partner, so the content and everything remains constant throughout.

-Formula.

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