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Old 11-09-03, 01:09 AM   #10
A.T.
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damn... alot of spam

your hook was ok... I liked "that"... but the first verse had
absolutely nothing to do with the hook... you have got to
stay on topic,... but the second verse was on topic and its
a good verse... I liked that... this peice could have been much
better if uski would have stayed on topic... next collab... make
sure you both know the topic so your verses have the right
content.
~AshY~
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